Children of the dust.
So frail and fradgile,
Can't speak a word,
Can't see through the eyes of truth,
Olny lies can be heard,
Looking through the dark,
To see if the day has come.
Wednesday, November 28, 2007
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9 comments:
OHMYGOD THAT POEM IS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!! I LIKE IT BECAUSE IT LEFT A KIND OF SAD FEELING INSIDE MY HEART, AND ONY TRUE POETRY COULD DO THAT FOR ME. THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT! =)
i like this because its discriptive.
hi layla, i liked this post because it was a mixture of feelings like: scared,sad,anger,and some other ones
lol :D
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WHOA! Thats really good Layla! I like this entry because you are speaking your mind and your having good word choice! =]
WHOA! Thats really good Layla! I like this entry because you are speaking your mind and your having good word choice! =]
I think this poem is so good! I like it so much because it makes me feel something which is really good even thuogh it made me sad!
wow thi is really good. i like it alot because it made me think.
very discriptive
i liked this post because it spoke to me
layla evry time we do blog coments i always look forword to reading your poems. your writeing tuches people in way that is hard to explain. there is a truth of some sort behind all of your writeing. i liked this poem especially because of the way you wrote it it made me feel sad and happy because it's great writeing. i hope you continue write forever.
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