Pools of color,
Rays of light,
Floating above the clouds,
Seeing what cannot be seen,
Watch the world turn
Smile at the stars,
Talk to the sun...
and the moon
Thursday, January 3, 2008
Posted by Layla at 1:57 PM
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I'm old greg
Pools of color,
Rays of light,
Floating above the clouds,
Seeing what cannot be seen,
Watch the world turn
Smile at the stars,
Talk to the sun...
and the moon
Posted by Layla at 1:57 PM
5 comments:
layla, your imagination is really good! what makes you come up with those ideas? I like this because it actually made me feel like i was in the poem. I loved the smiling at the stars part, and looking at the stars. Keep up the good work!
i loved it because it made me think of looking up at the stars when i was little.
Whoa! This is an intense poem! I liked it because y ou really described everything you said
Whoa! This is an intense poem! Iliked this because you described every thing you said.
Awesome layla, i like this because you had really funny ones that were soooo true. I sugest writing about some happier stuff though.
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