Layla this is amazing work with all poems. It's truly deep you should start making poems to all classmates i think it would make us feel really good about each other. When you write this it makes me feel like a emotional boy because the last line And holds me here with you. Also you should get in a class for just poem writing. Mite as well practice some more.
Layla! This is really a beautiful poem! I love this because it is so sweet and short, but still very moving and mind boggling. This poem is very deep, and I really think you should continue to publish these! They are truly amazing. Keep this up and you will have a poem book out in no time! Lots of Love!
Lay ounce again i love your poetry. I think you are so right i want to float in to space wouldnt that be fun. I love this because you just put so much into your poetry and it's good each one in it's own way. I think that one day you wll become a writer. keep writeing.
i really love this becasue once i start reading it it drags me into it which i want to read more but at that time is over. i never knew you could right like this, its amazing. i really like poems becasue there not to short and not to long there just right.
hey I really like this poem.mainly because all your poems are so... intense and cool. i could never write such a creation. you know. mine would probly be about puppys or lollipops.
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Layla this is amazing work with all poems. It's truly deep you should start making poems to all classmates i think it would make us feel really good about each other. When you write this it makes me feel like a emotional boy because the last line And holds me here with you. Also you should get in a class for just poem writing. Mite as well practice some more.
Layla! This is really a beautiful poem! I love this because it is so sweet and short, but still very moving and mind boggling. This poem is very deep, and I really think you should continue to publish these! They are truly amazing. Keep this up and you will have a poem book out in no time! Lots of Love!
Wow, Layla. I like this entry because it sounds like a love poem. Is that what it is? It would be cool if you started a story. Keep it up!!!
WOw! That's pretty honest. It's a really beautiful poem too.I love this because it's really beautiful. keep writing.
Lay ounce again i love your poetry. I think you are so right i want to float in to space wouldnt that be fun. I love this because you just put so much into your poetry and it's good each one in it's own way.
I think that one day you wll become a writer. keep writeing.
I like this because it was really good and actually made sense. It made me feel a little sad, like i would be held in gravitys tight grip for ever.
i really love this becasue once i start reading it it drags me into it which i want to read more but at that time is over. i never knew you could right like this, its amazing. i really like poems becasue there not to short and not to long there just right.
hey I really like this poem.mainly because all your poems are so... intense and cool. i could never write such a creation. you know. mine would probly be about puppys or lollipops.
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