The flavors of the rainbow of the rainbow
The kiss of death
My last breath
The blood of blood of the innocences spills
You have stolen my heart
Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Posted by Layla at 1:53 PM
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I'm old greg
The flavors of the rainbow of the rainbow
The kiss of death
My last breath
The blood of blood of the innocences spills
You have stolen my heart
Posted by Layla at 1:53 PM
2 comments:
I like it because it has rainbows and death. Yes, I am psychotic. It is really deep, sad, and romantic. Keep writing stuff like this. Peace out.
This is so...darkish and moving. It's so origanal. I think your short, little poems actually explain alot in there little words used. I liked this because it is very deep and it makes you think. Good writing!
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